Prompt for November 22, 2015

Complete the short story/flash fiction, that has the following first paragraph:

The bar had been crowded when he entered, filled with people celebrating the football game. Overcrowded was probably the better word. Standing room only with a noise level that deafened him as soon as he entered. He was only there for a short time, however, as all he really needed to do was drop his backpack off near the back wall, turn around and then leave. He wanted to be close, but not too close, when the timer went off and the cheers of victory turned into cries of pain. He strode away from the bar, his limp the only thing that separated him from the crowd around him.

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